April 6, 2011

A Lived Fable

The photopoetry below is created as part of the One Shot Wednesday on One Stop Poetry, a place where poets, writers and artists meet.



Fleeting rays of sunlight,
A warm touch, a rhythmic sight,
The sky; A blushing blue.
The sea; An orange hue.

Reflected before the night,
A dream (so true).

Blooming words in love letters,
A warm touch, your rhythmic whispers,
A fabled evening; Tea for two.
A song written; Painted souls too.

Lived each day and night,
A dream (thank you).

4 comments:

  1. you paint a wonderful scene in this...and painted souls is a fav line...

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  2. Almost dreamlike in the vision given...a lovely scene-capture, bright bit of imagery; the love sings through it, that bloom of romance. I concur with Brian, too - "painted souls" is my favorite line to it. Simple, effective rhymes and a well-structured piece. Quite smooth.

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  3. Very nicely done and your wedding pictures are beautiful. Thanks for sharing with One Shot.

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  4. Thank you very much, Brian, Chris and Andy. This was indeed written for my husband :-)

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